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Chief Marketing Officer
FOLIOfn, Vienna, VA
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Author: Simple Fun For Busy People
(Conari Press)
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FOLIOfn, Inc.,
Vienna, VA
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EMAIL CAMPAIGN for ONLINE BROKERAGE FIRM:
(Went to Account-Holders, who had not yet funded, encouraging them to fund theirAccounts)
#1
SUBJECT LINE: Folio Investing: Our New Year.s Gift to You!
EMAIL COPY:
Dear John,
You recently opened your account with us, and we want to make sure you had a good experience.
We’re here to help, so if you have ANY questions, concerns or suggestions, please don’t hesitate to call or email us right away.
We wanted to tell you, too, that we.re offering a 30-day FREE trial on all our
monthly plans! (Choose one as low as $19.95 per month... flat fee!)
So now is the perfect time to fund your account and watch it grow in 2007. Try one of our monthly plans FREE for 30 days.
At the end of 30 days, we’ll begin your billing cycle for the plan you selected. If you decide to discontinue -- just cancel within your free trial period and owe nothing.
Now self-directed investors can take control of their own financial future. In fact, you’ll wonder why it took you so long to get started.
You are important to us, and we’re here when you need us. So call 888.933.4142 or Email us at (email add).
Yours in successful investing,
George Morris
Manager, Client Services
P.S. Here are 3 Simple steps to become an ABC Investor:
1. Log in at (web site)
2. Find "Your Account" and select ".add money."
3. To buy securities, a Ready-to-Go portfolio or to create your own, just point your mouse to "My First Portfolio" and click ".trade."
4. Done
Disclaimer:
#2
SUBJECT LINE: Folio Investing: FREE 30-Day Trial When You Fund Your
Account
EMAIL COPY:
Dear John,
Congratulations on opening your account with us!
You have joined the ranks of some of the smartest investors, who have discovered the many advantages of Folio Investing.
What can we do to help you get started?
· Want investment ideas?
Then check out our 100 Ready-to-Go Portfolios (RTGs)
· Want performance history?
Then see how our RTG Folios compare to the performance of the S&P 500.
· Want guidance?
Then use our Wizard ... all the tools are at your disposal.
· Want help?
Then call our customer service department.
Choose a monthly plan and try it FREE for 30 days, with our compliments. (All plans come with a flat fee starting at only $19.95/month.)
You are important to us, and we’re here when you need us. So call 888.933.4142 or email us at (address)
Yours in successful investing,
George Morris
Manager, Client Services
P.S. Here are 3 Simple steps to become an ABC Investor:
1. Log in at (link).
2. Find "Your Account" and select "add money."
3. To buy securities, a Ready-to-Go Portfolio or to create your own,
just point your mouse to "My First Portfolio" and click "trade."
4. Done
Disclaimer:
#3
SUBJECT LINE: Folio Investing: How to Invest Smart in 2007
EMAIL COPY:
Dear John,
The new year is still young so make the smartest move of the year and FUND your account today!
Because we value you as a new member, we want to offer you a 30-day FREE trial. (Choose a monthly plan for as little as $19.95... flat fee!)
Then fund your account and use it for 30 days, without paying anything.
We’ll only bill you after the 30 day trial, assuming you choose to continue smart investing in 2007.
So it’s your move. We’ve designed an award-winning, technologically-advanced method for achieving your investing goals.
So, fund your account today and start investing smart in 2007!
You are important to us, and we’re here when you need us. So call 888.933.4142 or Email us at (address)
Yours in successful investing,
George Morris
Manager, Client Services
P.S. Become an ABC Investor in 3 Simple steps:
1. Log in at (link)
2. Find "Your Account" and select "add money. "
3. To buy securities, a Ready-to-Go Portfolio or to create your own, just point your
mouse to "My First Portfolio" and click "trade."
4. Done
Disclaimers:
POLL TO UNFUNDED ACCOUNTS, FOLLOWING THE 3 EMAILS:
SUBJECT LINE: Folio Investing: May We Ask Your Opinion?
Dear John,
Because you have opened an account with us, but not yet funded, we’d like to ask your opinion about us?
We’d greatly appreciate it, if you’d take only 60 seconds to answer these 4 simple questions?
1. I opened the account, but changed my mind. Yes ___ No ___
2. I opened the account, but found the process too difficult to understand.
Yes ___ No ___
3. I opened an account, but found the pricing was too complicated or not to my
liking. Yes ___ No ___
4. I opened an account and still intend to fund. Yes ___ No ___
Remember, we’re giving you a 30 day FREE trial, when you choose one of our monthly plans. (Plans start as low as $19.95/mo... flat fee!)
Thank you for your valuable opinion.
George Morris,
Manager, Client Services
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