Effective Copywriting — Hyperbole or Just Emphatic Truths?

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I recently read a post at Ryan Healy’s blog, which was talking about ‘hype’ in copy.

Oh, just in case anyone reads this, who is unfamiliar with the use of the word, copy, I am referring to words … language that’s used to elicit a specific response from readers … namely to buy something!

The upshot of the blog was that, as copywriters, we should all be careful to only use phrases that run the risk of being construed as ‘hype,’ when we have sufficient proof to back up any over-the-top claim or promise we’re spouting.

As marketing professionals, we know (or should know) how vital the sales messages are that we write for our clients — our words can make or break the sale.

And, even when there are outrageous-sounding claims or promises that can be made because they are actually true, I think the ‘oh yeah, right’ factor is a big one to overcome.  And this is especially true on the Internet.

What I mean by that is this:  People are bombarded with SO much exaggeration and promises of more beauty, more sex, more hair, more wealth SOO much that the mere claim of more, better, different is often discounted at best and ruinous at worst.

OK, you say, how do I get my sales message heard, amidst all the loud noises out there?  Good question.

I’ll try to answer it.  Are you, personally, turned off when you hear a lot of ‘over-the-top’ kinds of headlines or body copy, promising you the moon if you only use this or that product?  Do you feel a bit like your intelligence is being insulted?

I do.

That’s why I try to keep it down and to genuinely instill trust, by telling the truth.  I try to shy away from stupid in its many forms –  from falsehoods or products I wouldn’t sell to my worst enemy.  (If I had one.)

Emotional copy, of course, we all know is the best kind to ‘connect’ with our audience and to offer them benefits they really want for themselves.   But so much of it is pandering, placating and downright insulting.

Maybe there’s a place to talk to the poor, the gullible or the less-educated of the world and play on their ignorance … but I don’t want to write it.

I say effective copywriting doesn’t have to use hype.  And hard-to-believe truths can be tempered with a wise dose of sincerity to make them sound more believable.

And, when appropriate, always offer 3rd party proof.  That’s just smart, don’t you think?

Till next time, here’s to genuinely-effective copywriting!

Carolyn

http://www.kickasscopywriter.com